Cool timeline Maddy! You explained well how you were feeling, the non-excitement of your tenth birthday party, the frustration at the hospital, your disappointment at not being able to go to the hospital when Cassidy was born.... I really liked it. Well done!
I love the hospital story. You really make the reader feel your frustration.
ReplyDeleteCool timeline Maddy! You explained well how you were feeling, the non-excitement of your tenth birthday party, the frustration at the hospital, your disappointment at not being able to go to the hospital when Cassidy was born....
ReplyDeleteI really liked it. Well done!